No hard feelings ( beta ) by Daniel Lazarescu
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There’s nothing I could possibly do,
This place just seems to feel like you,
And even if I’d try to lie,
I’d try in vain, it feels so fine.
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Now take my hand and follow me,
Onto this road of ecstasy,
Would you be the one to smile at me,
Every day we’d just be free.
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And as we’d start to dance and sing,
The world would be a better thing,
As long as this can still go on,
I’m waiting for another song.
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This is how I feel my dear,
A shameless grin, all without fear,
Now take my hand and follow me,
Cause this is the road of ecstasy.
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The world is spinning just too fast,
The hourglass will never rest,
And even as we wait in line,
One day we all do have to die.
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So once again I’m standing here,
Thinking about you my dear,
And I just don’t want to regret,
Not having said what’s to be said.
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So take my hand and follow me,
This is the road of ecstasy.
It doesn’t matter what will be,
Life is short, it could be fine.
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I just don’t want to stand in line.
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-" My hands are shivering since I can remember myself... they just do."
-" But they don't shiver when I hold them... so, you just need someone to hold your hand...."
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(Inspired by the song D.O.A. - Foo fighters)
5 comments:
OMG, you're a writer Daniel, WTF?
I didn't know you had it in you.
With a little bit of luck, tuesday I will have my Sonisphere Day 2 Golden Area Ticket, so I'll see you there on Saturday.
Take care.
I am, yes, at least that's what it looks like :D
Ahm, alright, I suppose I will see you there, although I have no idea right now who wrote the comment. BUT WHY NOT! :D
^_^ Thanks for the comment anyway.
The poem is as wonderful as usual, but what caught my attention and I just HAD to tell you is those small lines at the end. They made my day. I dunno who told you that second line, but you should hold on to that person cuz she knows what she's talking about.
Well, thank you ^_^ I appreciate that you like it. And I know... I'm doing my best, really.
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